Unit 71 Should Smoking Be Banned?
目前有许多人对该不该戒烟有不同的看法。你以“Should smoking Be Banned?”为题,发表自己的意见和看法,写一篇120字左右的短文。
“范文”
Should Smoking Be Banned?①
Should smoking be banned? Different people have different opinions.
Some smokers think smoking is a kind of enjoyment, and they can live without food, but die without smoking. Also, they say that they have freedom of smoking and it has nothing to do with② others. However, a lot of non- smokers don’t agree. In their opinion, smoking is harmful to③ not only smokers themselves, but also to public health, especially to women and children. Therefore④, many countries have worked out⑤ laws to forbid smoking in public places, such as cinema, hospital, station.
Nowadays, smokers make up⑥ one quarter of the world population. If the problem of smoking is not dealt with⑦ seriously, the health of human will be in danger⑧. So smoking should be banned in no time.⑨
“注释:”
①ban:vt.禁止,同forbid
②have nothing to do with:与……无关
③be harmful to:对……有害
④therefore:adv.因此
⑤work out:制定
⑥make up:占有
⑦deal with:处理,对付
⑧(be) in danger:在危险中
⑨in no time:很快,马上
“点评:”
这是一篇要根据情景提示展开的三段式议论文。本文所讨论的也是当今社会的一个热点问题。
第一段,作者开门见山提出问题,并用“Different people have different opinions”很自然地过渡到下一段。
第二段作者分别陈述了两种对立的观点。在前半部分,作者陈述了一些吸烟者的观点:他们认为吸烟是一种享受,不抽烟,他们就活不了。而且他们还认为,他们有吸烟的自由,这与其他人无关。在本段的后半部分,作者用however进行转折,陈述了另外一些人的对立观点。这些non-smokers认为,吸烟对吸烟者本人和被动吸烟者均产生巨大危害,许多国家制定法律禁止在公共场所吸烟。
第三段作者用“Nowadays smokers make up one quarter of the world population”具体说明吸烟者人数之众,进而表明了自己的观点,禁烟迫在眉睫,势在必行。